I need someone to proofread/revise lines of dialog (script)

$8-15 USD / hour

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$8-15 USD / hour

I currently have two scripts that need proofreading - both scripts are of a personal trainer, speaking to a client. One is a guy, and one is a girl, both talking to a person of an unknown gender. I, unfortunately, am repeating a lot of lines and phrases over. Such phrases that are being repeated are: "I'll see you next time" and "Let's get started". I need someone to go through and to clean up the writing and make it less repetitious. I need someone with a strong (fluent) understanding of the English language, and someone who preferably athletically inclined due to the subject matter. I'm not looking for a complete rewrite, but someone who can proofread and revise. Basically, a human thesaurus with an understanding of slang. Example lines: *You just finished your your 15th work out! How does it feel? Give yourself a pat on the back and stretch some muscles, and I'll see you next time. *Congratulations on completing 20th workout! You. Are. Awesome. Go treat yourself, jump into a hot-tub, and I'll see you next time. *You've just completed more workouts than there are hours in a day! Way to crush it! Go have some water, and I'll see you next time.

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@almesec

I would love to proofread for you. I have taught school for more than 25 years and have proofread a lot! I'm just starting my proofreading career and would love to work with you! Thanks for your consideration!

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@Hoffman24

Hi, An experienced and skilled writer with impeccable grammar skill, strong visual awareness, and insists on spelling perfection, you can rest assured that anytime I edit, proofread, and analyze a document of any size it will be returned in tip-top shape and free from errors. Grammatical perfection is a necessity in a finished document, and I will analyze, modify, revise, and reword as necessary so you will be left with a superior finished product. I also do all my editing, proofing, and rewriting manually without the use of any online rewriting programs. When quality counts, contact me. Best regards, James Walpole

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@brightestwriter

Hello...I am a highly motivated writer with 7 Years experience in articles/content/academic writing. Also, I have a degree in Business Administration. As a native English speaker, I can guarantee the highest standard of spelling, grammar and syntax. I have vast knowledge in this sector and I will deliver quality content and 100% free of plagiarism. Kindly, assign me this order Feel free to contact me

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@ExpertzWorld

I’m a writer, an idea guy, and a difference-maker. I write with passion, discernment, perception, credibility, and punctuality which make me come up with the best result ever. Also, I deliver great results with a process that’s timely, collaborative and at a great value for my clients. I am reliable, innovative, creative, swift, dependable, effective, and efficient. I always give desired result with the sole aim of exceeding my clients' expectation and making them "wow". Once again, I always love to meet up with expectations. Just contact me for a chat, my price is fair, always at your willingness to pay. Thanks ............................................................................................. To hire me directly, just copy and paste in your url "www.freelancer.com/hireme/expertzworld"

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@XenaPatricia

Hi, Though my page does not have reviews about being a human thesaurus, I do a lot of reading and enjoy looking out for errors in scripts or write ups that I come across in my personal space. I'm native English, I have a good eye for detail and flow of a conversation. I have good communication skills, updating you on progress of project and available in case you have any questions or need clarifications on what I am doing. Thanks.

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@richardwickham44

I am a professional writer with a 24/7 customer support with willingness and ability to work within your Budget and requirements. I am offering you the best of the best quality writing services. This I offer, according to your budget with around the clock customer service support. Do you have an urgent project? Are you stuck with your project? I am more than ready to assist you with your project. I am a proficient academic writer and researcher with over six years of writing experience. I have handled over 4,000 projects for native clients from Canada, Australia, the UK, and the US, and I believe this has helped me gain the prerequisite abilities to deliver great quality work continuously. My life’s belief, “Do not compromise on the quality and your customers will not negotiate on the price.” Thanks in advance, I look forward to a long-term writing relationship with you.

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@lauramn

Hi, I was thrilled to see this bid. I have five years experience working in the media industry, with a degree in New Media & Journalism. A fitness related project is right up my alley, as cycling and yoga are a part of my exercise routine. I am very fluent in English. Depending on how long the scripts are, I could actually see this taking less than 40 hours. I am a quick worker. Are you looking for something along these lines? *You just finished your your 15th work out! How does it feel? Give yourself a pat on the back and stretch some muscles, and congratulate yourself on being amazing! *Congratulations on completing 20th workout! You. Are. Awesome. Go treat yourself, jump into a hot-tub, and enjoy a well-earned relax. Given more time and after talking to you I'm sure I can take it where you want it to go. Please don't hesitate to reach out - I might be a new Freelancer but I have no doubt you'll be happy you hired me. Best, Laura

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@Savvy13

Hi! I have an MA in Film and TV with a specialization in screenwriting. I have written both feature-length and short film scripts, as well as a few promotional videos. I have seen many fitness videos and know how they go, and would love to help out with yours. My work is error-free and reliable. We can discuss details on chat.

$8 USD em 15 dias