Correction/rewrite of causal game intro text

Hello everyone, We are a small causal game studio and we would new to correct mistakes in our short intro text. But not only that. We need some native English speaker to rewrite this intro text something which will look more "professional " and actually like written by someone who is used to write fairytales etc. The text itself is very short, it is basically few sentences( you cant find the text in the attachment) .We need someone who will not only proofread and correct the mistakes in text but actually think about it and put some effort so it will look more fancy. Please also note that we don't want to make the text bigger, nothing like adding much more text, just rewrite it so the length will be approximately the same but the grammar and sentences will look like written by someone who know English language very well. Note : The story should not be changed. A lot of references in text are actually present in game itself. So please don't change the story or places, actors etc..too much.