Refine a Logo design based on Feedback

  • Status: Closed
  • Prêmio: $100
  • Inscrições Recebidas: 2
  • Vencedor: merumedia

Síntese do concurso

Must design in Adobe Illustrator
Please supply Font files and the editable Illustrator file in handover.

The current Master Brand and Sub-Brand logo design still isn't quite what the client is looking for.
The design brief is to create a Master Brand using the Cherry Blossom and Humming Bird. Then design Sub brands that tie in with the Master Brand. The FedEx Brand is a similar set-up.

I have attached a few versions all with the client's feedback.

What I need is a design for the Master Brand and it's Sub-Brands that she absolutely loves.

The concept rounds and editable Illustrator files are attached for you to use as a starting point.

FEEDBACK
Overall comments:
The flower needs to be much more identified as a cherry blossom.
Would like to see the teal colour brought into all sub-brands

Round 1
Likes: Concept 1 Page 1 colour combination for "Talbot Centre" the brown/fawn colours used

Dislikes:
- That the flower looks like a Lotus flower and not enough like a cherry blossom.


Concept Round 2

Dislikes:
- The font used for Talbot when it is in lowercase
- The flower for the "o" because it directs the viewer to the flower instead of viewing the words first.

Cherry Blossom Notes:

Likes: The flowers on pages 1, 2 & 3 because they are more identifiable as a cherry blossom.

Dislikes:
- When cut in half due to their simplicity they do not look like cherry blossoms anymore.
- Flower in number 4 - too busy

Unsure: How would the placement and balancing work with a full flower instead of a half flower.

Hummingbird Notes
Likes: bird on page 3
Dislikes: position - would prefer it in the top right corner around the t at the end of talbot.

Habilidades Recomendadas

Feedback do Empregador

“Really responsive and awesome to work with on these logo projects.”

Foto do perfil BeverlyCassidy, Australia.

Painel de Comentários

  • BeverlyCassidy
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    try putting the tree to the right or left, and then try to balance the bird into the logo some where.

    • 6 anos atrás
  • ShofulIslam8031
    ShofulIslam8031
    • 6 anos atrás

    #guaranteed #sealed #sealed

    • 6 anos atrás
  • bv77
    bv77
    • 6 anos atrás

    #guaranteed

    • 6 anos atrás

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