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here's the revision

Here's the revision Sir, Please check the design and let me know if you need another change, Thanks!

Inscrição nº 30 do Concurso para                                                 Design Brochure for sales mobile application
Inscrição nº30

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  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    too white here

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    Put the women in the background

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    User rounded corners

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    Images in this page needs to be more homogeneous in terms of colors, forms and sizes.

    The same thing for text, can you align it please

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    Replace with an illustration of seller taking photos of his products.

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    Here use the screenshot listing the products

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    The title is too big, and there is not enough space in this page.

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    The shopper should not be the same person as the shopper.
    step 1 : seller
    step 2 and 3 : shopper
    I suggest you put a man or women looking at a phone or computer. why not the same as before.

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    A man with a tie does not really represent a a seller in a Moroccan shop.

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    I don't like it. I suggest you replace with white text directly on the blue background. Try and see the result.

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
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    • 6 anos atrás

    After some consideration, i think there's no need to distinguish benefits for seller and shoppers. You can merge them.
    This could help you reorganize this page to look simpler and easier to read

    • 6 anos atrás
  • relalaoui
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 6 anos atrás

    I don't like the green color here

    • 6 anos atrás

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