Design and Improve this Pitch Deck for Smipter : Uber for Social-Commerce

  • Status: Closed
  • PrĂŞmio: $120
  • Inscrições Recebidas: 15
  • Vencedor: yashb3701

SĂ­ntese do concurso

I will have soon to pitch with investor, but I want the better version of this.

Use this content (You can change if reasonable). Make it make sense, infographic (Option) and make it look clean and simple.

I want it in Keynote,(or Powerpoint) and PDF.

The attached file is in Keynote, or you can see it in PDF as well.

Clarity of presentation, creativity of presentation,

Ps.1 : Assume that we use logo below, but in red color and white logo.
Ps. 2 : We need less than 15 pages.
Ps. 3 : For March 14 Traction :
Event
IOS App 1.0
Android App 1.0
- Mou with WangLaoJi

Traction
- 1600 Shipments
- 105 Customers
- 52 memberships
- Start shipping for Taobao shops
- Growth 310%
- Gross Margin 42%
- 390 Driver Registration

Burn Rate : $12000

PS.3 : to give some idea : the landing page should be in the printscreen below. You can adjust font or whatever you want. But better to have the red(orange BG) with logo in white.

Ps.4 : Minimalism!!

Ps.5 : I have now update the logo

Rule of Judge :
1. We will give a vote from our company and customer by tomorrow at 16 Bangkok time and the vote will go on until the day after at 12 AM Bangkok Time.
2. Only 5 starts rating will be able to join vote list.

Habilidades Recomendadas

Feedback do Empregador

“Great One, we will hire you again. ”

Foto do perfil kobenlee, Thailand.

Painel de Comentários

  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 anos atrás

    congrats to the winner.God bless you.

    • 9 anos atrás
  • mireaiuliana
    mireaiuliana
    • 9 anos atrás

    hello, Yash3701 you have stollen my structure for the slides : Solution, Our competitor, Drivers, unfair advantage, traction 1 and traction 2 so i've got to semnalate this...it's not fair to stole somebody idea and only to change the design...I was thinking for 2 days how to arrange this presentation in order to be more corporate and you have copied it...let's win a contest with our work and ours ideas...let's do a honest work !!!

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 anos atrás

      Hello mireaiuliana I haven't copied your style... I just followed what the CH told me... :)

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. mireaiuliana
      mireaiuliana
      • 9 anos atrás

      I'm not saying that you copied my style but my structure. It's not the same thing. Can you please show me when you got the instructions to have the same structure like mine ...i wanna see the comments, please ? It's almost impossible that 2 designer have the same structure for one presentation because we think differently and in the beginning your direction was competly different. After I put my presentation you have posted your who...miracle have the same structure like mine. It's not coincidence...

      • 9 anos atrás
  • mireaiuliana
    mireaiuliana
    • 9 anos atrás

    Hello,

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #41

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #40

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #39 :)

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #38

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #37

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #35

    • 9 anos atrás
  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 anos atrás

    hi kobenlee you need psd of this pdf or ppt(keynote)

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      ah PPT (Keynote) if you can

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. Elephantart
      Elephantart
      • 9 anos atrás

      Ok no worries.Just wait for today.I'll submit today.

      • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #34

    • 9 anos atrás
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 anos atrás

    Check Entry #33

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    I just saw that you made the other freelancer winner on your logo creation contest...Can I use my logo now in your slides or the winner's logo... ??

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 anos atrás

      yes sir, i am doing that only..today only you will get your PDF

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 anos atrás

      going to submit...

      • 9 anos atrás
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 anos atrás

    Hi Mr. Lee, I'll be uploading my presentation within 3-4 hours. Will be waiting for your feedback. I have made it very infographic using good colors & the structure is very good. Also, It has a very professional feel to it. I hope you like it.

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      Please be hurry to submit this pitch. We have to decide it very soon.

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. subhammittal95
      subhammittal95
      • 9 anos atrás

      I'll need high res images of all your team members by the way

      • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    please wait for my other submission

    • 9 anos atrás
  • pvaghela86
    pvaghela86
    • 9 anos atrás

    Thank you for inviting. i will submit the designs soon.

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      Please be hurry to submit this pitch. We have to decide it very soon.

      • 9 anos atrás
  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 anos atrás

    We will submit soon.

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      Please be hurry to submit this pitch. We have to decide it very soon.

      • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Please check #32

    • 9 anos atrás
  • kobenlee
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 9 anos atrás

    The winner will be only one, but I found many presentation is really interesting. So, our team have decided that if some of you are not voted to be the winner, but we still consider to buy out your presentation for 30-50$ each. I would like you guys to set the price between this one, if you don't win and want to sell to our company.

    • 9 anos atrás
  • kobenlee
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 9 anos atrás

    Rule of Judge :
    1. We will give a vote from our company and customer by tomorrow at 16 Bangkok time and the vote will go on until the day after at 12 AM Bangkok Time.
    2. Only 5 starts rating will be able to join vote list.

    • 9 anos atrás
  • kobenlee
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 9 anos atrás

    Guys, I have some new guideline from Ps.2 - Ps.4! And I increase the price to 120 USD.

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 anos atrás

      Please check #30

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. yashb3701
      yashb3701
      • 9 anos atrás

      Please check #31

      • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Check #19

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Check #16 :)

    • 9 anos atrás
  • yashb3701
    yashb3701
    • 9 anos atrás

    Hello Sir, Thank You for the invitation for your next contest... :)
    Can I use my logo instead of the logo that you attached..In the Infographic ??
    Hoping for a reply from you.. :)

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      Yes, sure. You can use your logo.

      • 9 anos atrás
  • kobenlee
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 9 anos atrás

    This is a nice presentation software (free trial). May be you should try.

    • 9 anos atrás
  • Elephantart
    Elephantart
    • 9 anos atrás

    thanks for inviting.

    • 9 anos atrás
  • kobenlee
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 9 anos atrás

    Thank everyone to submit your pitch to me. I am really appreciated it.

    Better if you guys can make it "lean design" and emphasis on to make wording clear. Normally, I have only 5 minutes to pitch. So, when the investor look at each slide they would know what I am doing suddenly. I think infographic can help.

    This is some example : https://creativemarket.com/PitchStock/4423-Universal-Pitch-Deck-Two-Keynote
    https://creativemarket.com/PitchStock/4868-Universal-Pitch-Deck-Six-Keynote

    Thank

    • 9 anos atrás
  • mireaiuliana
    mireaiuliana
    • 9 anos atrás

    hello, can I change the images ?

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. mireaiuliana
      mireaiuliana
      • 9 anos atrás

      Can you communicate me your opinion about the presentation made. Do you want to apply some changes ? Many thanks !

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      Hi, Mireaiuliana. Thank for your pitch. I like your design and arrangement. However, lots of background is too messy. I want investor to concentrate on what I am doing. So could you please to make it clean? Compare to others, you have the better structure. So, if you just make the lean design that would make this presentation wonderful. Some tick : make more infographic.

      You can see some example in google by searching on "Pitch Design" .

      • 9 anos atrás
  • kobenlee
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 9 anos atrás

    Thank guys for submition. However, could you guys please focus on making it lean and design? Also, good structure is important too. Some trick is just make it more infographic, or searching "Pitch Design". Also, we have the new logo please use it if possible.

    • 9 anos atrás
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 anos atrás

    Uploaded the 1st 2 slides, waiting for feedback!

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. subhammittal95
      subhammittal95
      • 9 anos atrás

      Well, Anything you would like to be changed! I'll start working on the rest on the slides

      • 9 anos atrás
  • shahirnana
    shahirnana
    • 9 anos atrás

    Thank for the rating ...any comment to make #1 entry 5 star

    • 9 anos atrás
  • subhammittal95
    subhammittal95
    • 9 anos atrás

    Hi, Do you want a 4:3 aspect ratio or a fullscreen 16:9 aspect ratio ! I'm going to make a powerpoint & PDF. I might do some language changes to make it more clear. Preferred language is English, right? Thanks

    • 9 anos atrás
    1. subhammittal95
      subhammittal95
      • 9 anos atrás

      Hi, can you provide me your mail ID? I need to send you the 1st 2 slides of my design

      • 9 anos atrás
    2. kobenlee
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 9 anos atrás

      Could u make shot screen and put it to the contest? It does not allow to give email here.

      • 9 anos atrás

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