Hey there. I'm an English Literature student and the lead writer for Workshop55.com. I've written several Wikipedia pages for businesses in the past (including the one for Workshop55, which we just recently submitted for approval). The thing that business owners easily forget is that Wikipedia is purely INFORMATIVE ... NOT persuasive (save Jimmy Wales eliciting donations by spotlighting his "please help us" face). That means you cannot mention anything about prices or drop any sort of sales language. If it even SOUNDS like sales language--just ever so slightly!--it's going to get the big "REJECTED" stamp of disapproval. I like to break a company's page down into four parts: (1) Background, (2) Description, (3) User/Customer Experience (3a) Customers (3b) Employees/Freelancers, and (4) Services offered. This is the best way to describe your business in detail without overwhelming the reader or risking a promotional tone. I can usually sneak in ONE promotional statement, but it has to be in the form of a quote (e.g., "Mark Zuckerberg, founder of Facebook, describes the website as 'the easiest place to connect with friends and family on a daily basis.' "). Let me know if you have any questions. I'd be happy to have a chat about your business and brand. Thanks, and good luck.