Hello, and congrats on finishing your children's book! My name is Jackie, and I would absolutely love to copy edit it for you.
I'm a native English speaker with impeccable grammar skills. I also have a keen eye and ear for characterization, voice, flow, sentence structure, story arc, and plot. My passion is well-polished, great writing -- over the past year alone, I've edited more than twenty-five published works, including two children's books, as well as novels, screenplays, magazine articles, and business publications. I am currently a staff writer and editor with my city's monthly magazine, and I have worked in the past as a newspaper journalist and editor. My BA is in English with a concentration in creative writing.
You said you wanted to verify the translation; while I do know some Hebrew (I studied it in college and used it for a summer in Israel back in 2000), I wouldn't say I could faithfully verify that you've done perfect translation, if that's what you're looking for. However, I can make sure your English makes sense grammatically and the story is flawless.
I'd be more than happy to copy edit a sample free of charge in order for you to determine whether I am a fit for your needs.
I look forward to hearing from you!