Children's Picture Book - Feedback and Suggestions

Concluído Postado Mar 15, 2011 Pago na entrega
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I have written a picture book for young children (around 3 years old).

I would like to have someone read it and provide feedback and suggestions on how to improve it.

Suggestions could include:

* Changes to storyline

* Changes to characters

* Suggested re-writes for individual words or sentences

Or anything else you think could improve the story.

Changes would need to be made using Track Changes in Microsoft Word.

This project is designed for published writers or those with significant experience in writing for children. Please state your experience in your bid.

There will be significant follow-on work from this project - the successful provider may be offered future work if their suggestions are valuable.

Happy bidding! Any questions, please ask.

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28 propostas Projeto remoto Ativo em Mar 16, 2011

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lauriewolf

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mariathermann

Dear Employer Please see your PM for my bid details. Kind regards Maria

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destiny0awaits

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ritikach

Please see PM for details. Thanks!

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bisleshan

I am an experienced book writer specializing in children and young adults books. I can give you many suggestion in improving your book. Looking forward to work with you.

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Pepsqually

Excellent writer from the US with a degree in screenwriting, extensive experience writing plays and musicals for children, and multiple years experience teaching elementary school and kindergarten. Please see PM for a Mais

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targetworker

Hi!! I am deeply interested in your work. Please check PMB

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JosyCatherine

Hi, i am interested in doing this job.

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lanlan23

I am a book author and knowledgeable on publishing issues. I know how to proofread and edit so well. I'm very much interested on this job. I can provide you all suggestions and comments you need.

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SierraMike

Able to commence immediately. Please refer to the PM for further details.

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risha30378823

hi i am a psychologist and i am interested in the project.

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irina7

I like your this project,I also work with kids,so it would be like playing.

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ScarlettOHara

Kindly check PM for details. BR, Samar Waqar

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sp500fl

I work full time in a preschool i believe I can provide a great childs perspective for your book.

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NinaYK

I worked as an English teacher for years and I wrote many stories for children. I understand very well the mentality of young children and I am really creative when it comes to story writing! Ready to start straight aw Mais

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LarissaVinci

Please see PM for more information. Thank you!

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petey212

I'm a university graduate, currently working fulltime in IT and studying an mba. I'm an avid reader and would find this task easy, enjoyable and would give valuable feedback. I have 2 young nephews who are around the t Mais

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LauraK

Would love to work with you on this. I have not had any children's work published, but I have worked with my child and her friends and come up with many fun stories complete with handdrawn artwork. I look forward to he Mais

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aabdulla

i have no previous experience, but i am sure if you let me work, you will like it. thanks

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arif234

My English 'looking through the eyes of kids' is great beyond words. A trial will convince you.

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rajeshkumarsinha

pls check pm

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MarkTierno

I have a published fantasy book, have already written a number of fiction books that total 7-8 million words in total, and can easily put myself in the mind of any reader, be they 3 or 33. My resume and samples are at Mais

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