ASAP: Constructive Criticism + Edits of a speech for a general audience.

Some details would help. For example, how long is the speech? What's the general topic? That sort of thing. Note that while I'm a good writer and have a very good ear for wording and flow, I've never worked on a speech before.

Lets discuss the ideas in your mind. ..

Hey there, I can make it perfect for you. I have sufficient experience in writing debates and speeches on a variety of topics and will surely add value to yours. Kindly provide me the opportunity to assist you and beware of outsourcing bidders, they'll ruin your work.

Hello! I am a native English speaker with a Master's degree in English literature. I have experience teaching at the university level, as well as 6 years of experience writing and (orally) presenting complicated information effectively for general and professional audiences alike, I would be thrilled to help you revise your speech. If you award me this project, I will proofread your speech and provide some editing suggestions in comment bubbles in MS word. Grammatical revisions will be noted using the track changes function so that you will be able to accept or reject them at your own discretion. I would be able to do this by the end of the weekend. Moreover, if you have the time for it, I would like to either hear a recording of your voice or speak to you over Skype before I get to work, so that I can adjust my suggestions to your own accent and cadence. As I do not yet know how long this speech is meant to be, nor its contents, I cannot offer more than a speculative quote right now, but I am interested in hearing more. I look forward to hearing from you, and I hope to work with you soon :)

Good day, I have written and edited beautiful speeches for all sorts of events from graduations to Bar Mitzvahs to conventions. I would love to discuss your speech and your goals at your event, and help you shape what you already have into something stirring, funny, moving, or whatever you would like it to be! Please feel free to message me with any questions. I can provide you with samples, and a list of testimonials from previous happy clients. Thank you so much for your time. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Tiffany Maxwell

Dear Client: I am an experienced postgraduate-level, academic writer, proofreader and researcher on varying topics and fields. I have written my own PhD thesis and have ample exposure in writing, translating and proofreading PhD theses, dissertations, essays, legal documents, journal papers, scientific articles, paper summaries, and research/grant proposals. I have a command over all citation styles. Quality is of paramount importance in any endeavor. My main strengths are commitment, attention to details, versatility, and trust. I am creative and open to refine the final version in case you wish to. I do not outsource. I write original, plagiarism-free texts. I´d love to do this task. Consider my bid. I can start right now. Best regards,

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As an English teacher and editor, I'm highly interested in avoiding language mistakes. More important than ensuring that everything is 'right,' however, is the actual effectiveness of your speech. I have experience in public speaking - church and school - and my linguistic and literary background can benefit your speech. I hope it goes well!

I'm very familiar with speech-writing techniques such as "the rule of three", identification, momentum etc. Let's see what we can come up with together.

Hello, I am a teacher to English grammar and Aristotelian rhetoric. In fact, just Monday I taught a lesson to the second canon of rhetoric, "dispositio," which refers to the arrangement, or the most effective ordering of your points as to be maximally persuasive. I'm also preparing a lesson on the third canon, "elocutio"or style. I will be able to analyze your speech in these ways, and give you feedback concerning the overall direction and end of your words. I can also smooth out your phrasings, correct grammar, and suggest tropes or figures of speech you might pepper into your speech for greater effect. I hope we will be able to work together. Best to you, lauradeesage

As I studied communications and political science in college, I am very experienced at public speaking and speech writing. I would be delighted to help you with your speech so that you can be as comfortable as possible when you deliver it. Please do not hesitate to message me with any questions.

I'm the perfect man for this job. I have over a decade of experience with speech writing and public speaking. I've competed nationally in academic speech contests and I've coached others to compete competitively. I'm willing to look over your speech for your asking price of $40, so let's start!

Being trained for the general audience speech, I have the practice to write and speak for 5-10 minutes and deliver the message within the time frame given.