Hello - I could certainly help you with your pitch. It's funny I just went through this myself...It was actually for a rental that I had my sites set on. After a couple of powerful letters, I got it! Add to that the fact that I was in real estate for a decade... I understand exactly how this all works. The key is to appeal both to their wallet and their emotions. Some sellers are stuck on this concept of the ideal buyer. You have to be a mind reader in some respects. And I do that better than anyone! You can actually check out my overall writing style and tone at scribassist.com. Holding a PhD in English, I know that I can create dynamic text for you.
A little on my background...I have spent the past ten years in sales and marketing for a construction/realty company. Additionally, since 2011 I have been working in a freelance/consulting capacity. Through my company, I've helped businesses and start-ups negotiate the nuances of online marketing and branding.
I've developed website material for a multitude of industries from art, to law, to health care, to name a few. I basically spend my days in front of my computer ensuring that the online strategies I've employed are in fact working. If they don't show results, then I am not doing my job.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Best,
Anne