Hello Shari,
I would be happy to take a look at your article and help you get it into shape. I am an Associate of the UK Society for Editors and Proofreaders (SfEP) and my previous employment involved writing and editing bids for international donor-funded projects. I've also visited Australia (East and West coasts) a few times in my travels, and really like the country and the people.
If you'd like to take a look at my profile here on Freelancer, my portfolio contains an article I wrote a few months ago for an in-house magazine - this will give you an idea of my writing style and a bit of information about me. I'm adaptable to whatever the tone and circumstances happen to be, and have recently written blog articles on behalf of a pest control firm here in the UK that were well-received by the owner with the promise of repeat business.
It would be great to help you with this piece of work. I'm available to work on it today if you'd like someone to do the work for you immediately.
All the best,
Gavin