Hello,
I have experience in re-writing articles and a great eye for details.
Please see below an example of my work:
"Word has it that Clay Matthews may need to update his relationship status... sorry ladies. The NFL rumor mill is buzzing about Clay Matthew's new girlfriend Kristi Stalter. Who is that you ask? Well it turns out Kristi is a fairly regular girl who happens to have scored one of the NFL's most eligible bachelors.
My work:
Rumor has it that Clay Matthews has major changes in his relationship status. For all the ladies who are sighting, the word on the streets is that Clay Matthew’s new girlfriend is no one other than Kristi Stalter. For those who do not know her, she is a regular in dating the NFLs bachelors, and now Matthews is said to be one of them.
Kristi is not a well know name, but she is on the right way, as her fashion blog in growing and growing in fans: over 20,000 readers daily. With her unique style, Kristi managed to attract sponsors from all over the world, and she is being the lucky possessor of free clothing and accessories from these. Except for her blogging activity, Kristi is trying to enter the fashion world by modeling, but she is paying her bills out of a teaching salary, as she is teaching for second grade classes in Blooming Wisconsin.