Re write the press release for musician's live show

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  minhajislam87682

  • 5 anos atrás

  #12 ... please check my work... I you like my work

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  xeric777

  • 5 anos atrás

  #1

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  ZakTheSurfer

  • 5 anos atrás

  please check out the entries #5 #6 #7 #8 #9

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  mrconley

  • 5 anos atrás

  Can you please clarify how the press release will be used? To announce a series of upcoming concerts? To announce a specific concert? To get the attention of the media, you need to have some kind of reason you're sending the press release. Thanks for any clarification you can provide. Also, I see that you only have three entries. Any chance you'll increase the prize?

  • 5 anos atrás
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     whetstoneedits

     • 5 anos atrás

     I second Marcia C.: please update the brief with the press release's purpose, and please upgrade the contest with an #increaseprize and #sealed.
     
     It's clear that you are a passionate representative for Sian and Kosheen. We are also passionate about our work (writing), and request that you reward our passion with proportionate wages.
     
     Yes. There are people who will do the work for less, but seeing your passion for the singer, it's quality and experience that you need. Those of us who have been doing this long enough have that quality and experience in our bones, but we cannot write for the wages you're offering.
     
     It's also on us to push for better wages for those who will work for less.Their work is worth more.
     
     I've been writing for 15 years, while Marcia C. has been at this for 40 years. That's longer than many of us have been alive, myself included. Expertise deserves to be rewarded.
     
     Do consider the #increaseprize.
     
     Thanks.
     
     -Whetstone

     • 5 anos atrás
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     Proprietário do Concurso

     • 5 anos atrás

     Hi Marcia
     thank you for commenting
     We'd like to use this press release to announce a series of upcoming concerts this year.
     So every shows' promoter would be able to post this short press release on the venue's website, ticket websites, FB event pages etc
     In addition our booking manager would like to send over this press release to the promoters get more shows for this year.
     So the main goal is to attract people and let them know that even if Kosheen disbanded, the band's voice and fronwoman still in the game performing almost the same show as it was Kosheen live show. But now it sounds much better.
     This press release is just for upcoming concerts this year and before she releases her solo album.
     I am sorry for the prize, this is the first time we're using this website. So it's like an experience for us as earlier we used to write all the text ourself.
     I've just increased the prize.

     • 5 anos atrás

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